Just played the new version. Like I said this game has the potential to be really fun! But you just need to get the game easier to play and understand... With out using text.

• Still very confusing. There is UI overload, and wayyyy to much text.
• Your start menu is confusing. Again, there is just too much text. Don't tell me how to play, show me. Get rid of all of those instructions on the left. Your Shift, and Coins look like buttons, and your "Start Next Shift" looks just like text, and not a button at all. Get rid of the box around the other 2, and make a box for start.

Your tutorial is not very helpful By the end of it, the player still has no actual idea on how to play your game. (I handed it to someone who hasn't payed to test).

• First, starting it is silly.. Again, too much text! Get rid of all the text, only have tutorial, and put a box around it to make it look like a button. You don't need the "New? Start the tutorial" part at all.
• When the tutorial starts, you're giving me more text to welcome me.. Why?! This overlay is doing absolutely nothing. Again, I have no idea how to get passed this. the "Tap me to continue" isn't clear at all. The only thing this screen added was a useless delay to actually start learning your game.
• Your instruction isn't too clear with out text. You should try to do everything without text, then add a small amount to hammer the message in their heads. The highlight circle belnds in too much. Make it more visible, and make my eyes go to it. Even still, I don't know what that actually means. For the first instruction, you can actually show boxes going to the exit.
• You're telling me to tap things I wouldn't in the game. Why are you teaching me the wrong things? I don't tap Exit, or entrance at all in the real game. So don't make me do it..
• Shouldn't entrance be before exit? First explain there are boxes (by showing them coming out of the entrance), then after I know about that, tell me the whole point is to go to the exit (again, by showing them going there).
• Don't tell me where the score is. That's not relevant at all to how the game actually plays. What you can do, is show the box going through the exit, and the user will naturally see the counter going up with each box.
• Your showing me the door panel.. But this looks different then the one in the game. Also, I have no idea what these doors look like or how this actually functions.
• Same with laser.
• At the end of the tutorial you say i'm ready for my first shift and to press continue. This goes to the main menu.. Why not make this just go right into the first shift?
• Add a "Quit tutorial" button so I can leave the tutorial.
• Suggest running the tutorial the first time the user plays the game, rather then leaving it for them to discover on their own.

The colors are very confusing. I'm having trouble understanding which color is which. I think this is because you should provide examples and work around the wordy instructions. Then you could provide nice visuals so if anyone is having a different problem, or my problem, it's gone.

Also, everything is very disorganized. Everything was all scattered on 1 screen, and it was sort of overwhelming to the eye. If you organize things with icons or buttons and a title screen with many seperate overlays and screens, it seems more professional, is easier on the eye and brain, and gives off the impression that you have more than you have.

I like the concept. Please keep adding more. I think you should make a storyline, nice flowing music, and a bunch of levels. You could keep the infinite mode as another option, but I really think that should be your main focus. If you can come up with another mode and surprise me, I'd be really impressed and you could publish to the App Store and make some nice bucks. Keep at it. I'm looking forward to seeing more! :)

Got a chance to play this today. It's a cool concept, and pretty fun game. However, your interface is very very confusing!

Even though the gameplay is really simple, it took me a few minutes to figure out what's going on. There is too many things on screen, and too much stuff happening too quickly, with very little feedback.

Your game starts immediately with out any warning. Then I'm hurled in an interface with buttons that I don't have enough time to try and figure things out. You don't let me actually explore the options and what they do. There are labels for a bout 1 second, but they are hard to read, and I'm distracted by the first box before I get a chance to notice them.

The Stat/stop/shop buttons.. They're another distraction. I kept pressing them thinking thats what I was supposed to use to play the game. Only after dying a few times did I realize they are a sort of pause system.

When your box collides with the edge of the door, it takes a few seconds for it to lose, until it passes the green spot. It should lose much quicker, because every time Is think I still have a chance since it only hit the edges a little bit.

I don't think I should get game over after 1 missed box. Maybe have a certain number of boxes you're allowed to miss, and make it progressively get harder (level based?).

I would make the game work off levels instead, and have a timer for how long the level lasts (and how many you need to deliver). Make it like a real factory job, there's a shift where you have and you have to work, and you have to do a good job. Make level one relatively easy, it's your first shift. Let me miss a few boxes. Then each level lower the amount I'm allowed to miss, and decrease the time.. You can also make other little advances like add more doors, different colours have to do different things.. It could get really fun and really intense!

I really like the concept, but I think you should start with making it easier to understand, and easier for a first time player to start playing.You want it easy to play, but hard to master.